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热心网友 时间：2024-11-04 14:10

百度翻译的，你自己看看吧。

邯郸印象
两个月前，我第一次来到这里。天空很阴暗，寒冷的天气比我的家乡。在去学校的路上，我在街上看到各种各样的花，它们是那么的暗淡，那些花有灰尘，邯郸的空气很不好。
一个月前，我来到九龙湖park.that第一，我独自在公园里从早上到晚上，在7:000pm，水龙头开始喷射，和霓虹灯开始flicker.the风景很漂亮。我很幸运，我没有错过它。
第二天，我来到了丛台公园，我看到了丛台很高，有许多装饰在它给我的感觉是老。
总的来说，邯郸是个好城市。

热心网友 时间：2024-11-04 14:04

不忍直视。

热心网友 时间：2024-11-04 14:07

two months ago, I frist came here. the sky is very gloomy,the weather is colder than my hometow.On the way to school. I saw all kinds of flowers in the street,they are so dim that those flowers have dust,handan 's air is very bad.
One month ago,I first came dragon lake park.that day, I was alone in the park from morning to night,about at 7:000pm,taps began to spray,and neons began flicker.the scenery is beautiful.I am lucky that I didn't miss it.
Next day I came to congtai park,I saw the congtai is very high,there are many decorates on the building.it gave me feeling that it is old.
In general,handan is a good city.

热心网友 时间：2024-11-04 14:11

The weather was cloudy and the temperature was colder than my hometown.